1.Why will my grandpa be special to others.
1)Escape from China
2)Learning experiences, NTU
3)Math teacher in CK
2.Background (1949)
1)澎湖山東案
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A6EXHnQUOLA
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http://pnn.pts.org.tw/main/2010/07/13/1949%E5%B9%B47%E6%9C%8813%E6%97%A5%E3%80%8C%E6%BE%8E%E6%B9%96%E6%A1%88%E3%80%8D%E6%98%AF%E3%80%8C%E5%A4%96%E7%9C%81%E4%BA%BA%E7%9A%84228%E3%80%8D/ 公視新聞
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2NaEXGHTCjc
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M-JCtdywa0o
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The topic is too broad. You should point out why your granddad is special right in the main idea statement.
回覆刪除Here is an example:
Topic: My one-of-a-kind grandfather
Main idea: My grandfather is special because he showed to me how perseverance, patience and love can make a difference in one's life.
Topic sentence for paragraph 1: No one compares to my granddad when it comes to perseverance.
(Then you can tell a story in his life to back up this point.)
Topic sentence 2: My granddad was such a patient person that he never got mad at others ...
Topic sentence 3:
The stories you mentioned in the post are not the main points. They are the examples/supporting sentences that help the audience know better about your main points.